Commentary:

ithecello, 28 Aug 2007 08:15 pm

There were two updates today. Go back a page for the first page.

Really bad page...because I forgot one thing...to erase the pencil marks...dundundun! what a sword eh? lol...you'll see it again...one day...

Edit: grammer/ explanation problem. the they in the 2nd panel are the humans and the immortals.

And the military is a human military. ah...sorry about that. I will edit this when i hve time.

Oh...hm...did I mean acquire or require...hm...lol

@ Silver-Songbird: heh...sorry. :P

Discussion:

catqueen13, 29 Aug 2007 08:48 am

I think it looks fine, with or without the pencil marks.

I really like the last panel. It's really cool with the sparklies effect.

Sol, 29 Aug 2007 10:56 am

Also, I think it should be they "require" Jenn's power, not "acquire"

Mare, 29 Aug 2007 04:22 pm

ooo I like this page <3333

Freyr (Guest), 01 Sep 2007 05:36 pm

Wow, I see a huge leap in quality in these recent updates. The coloring's nice and solid, the panels are more and more organized and coherent, and your style is just getting to be so cute. I envy you~~I'm still working on black and white....bleh.
Now, did the military attack Beta after Jenn left? And the headmistress looks like Elana? Or else I'm really confused. ^_^;

ithecello, 01 Sep 2007 08:59 pm

Yeah...like the day after Jenn left. (O...they found her. lol) And the headmistress is...hm...

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